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| Posted by: Lou Gojira Jun 22 2004, 03:03 AM |
| Hey all, I hope nobody minds me doing this, but I wrote a story about a barefoot girl hitch-hiking a little while back, and thought the members here would appreciate it more than anybody else I could think of who has read it so far. ________ The Spider and the Fly Part 1*Chapter 1 by: Lou Gojira The hot and scorching sun hung high in the summertime sky, like some ominous and vengeful god punishing the earth beneath it. The cotton-like clouds had dark-gray underbellies as they swelled up thick with intense humidity. Occasionally a soothing breeze, perhaps from an impending thunderstorm, would rustle the leaves of the trees and blow across the searing asphault of the back-country road. These occasional and very seldom small breezes were equivalent to a nice cold glass of ice water served up in the burning hell. Well, at least, that's how Lacey's mind had them figured out to be equivalent to as she savored each brief but lovingly pleasant second of them when they came. She stopped walking for a minute and rubbed her arm. The duffle bag of belongings she'd hastily thrown together felt like it gained a pound with each step she'd take. On days like this, and it seemed like there were a a streak of them as of late, she couldn't help but picture her arm dislocating from her shoulder, ripping free of her body, and hitting the ground. On a day like today, everything would ache. Not only her arms, but her back, her legs, her feet, pretty much anything that could register fatigue. And for some reason, to Lacey's dismay, particularly hot and humid days would intensify aches and aggrevation ten-fold. She looked around in disgust, as she worked her fingers into her arm to soothe her stretched bicep. "Fuck..." she exhaled as her eyes followed the empty road until it disappeared in a curve around a tree-covered mountain side. Rivulets of sweat glistened her forehead and chest, soaking the thin material of her her white tank top. She moved one barefoot to rest her sore and dirty sole on the denim of the opposite leg, moving it up and down to ease the sting of the roadside gravel and scorching asphault, then switched off to her other equally sore and dirty barefoot. "Damn...fuckin' feet are killin' me..."she thought, chewing into her dried bottom lip. Going barefoot was a staple of her character. Everywhere she went, be it a restaurant, a theatre, or even her job, she had always remained barefoot. Wearing shoes, she thought, was simply hiding one of her favorite assets, and Lacey had a tendency to be quite the exhibitionist. So like the times before, when she'd either stub a toe, or step down on something sharp, she forced the pain of the terrain out of her mind. This situation was different, though. Where she found herself now, she hadn't chosen to brave the earth barefooted, but rather she was caught up and pulled in to the incidents leading to it. She brushed a few locks of her bleach-blonde and sweat-matted hair away from her pretty face (though she knew the side-effects of this little trip she was on made her face a appear bit more dark and gaunt than usual). 'Let's see-' she thought begrudgingly '-there's been a total of seven cars come down this goddam road today, and not a fucking one stopped!' She turned and looked at the grass covered ravine behind her, and found herself stumbling down into it. It was as if her feet were pulling the rest of her to follow them so they could get some relief on the soft grass. She took some big steps, as the slope was a little more steep than it looked at first, and thought almost jokingly: 'What- people too good to pick up wandering strangers anymore?' Up until three days ago, hitch-hiking had proved to be somewhat useful in getting her from point A to point B. Why her luck seemingly dried up all of a sudden would probably remain a mystery, but Lacey figured it was because she was looking more haggard and unkept than she did when she first started out. Sure, she still looked good, though she wasn't aware of it since she hadn't seen a mirror in the last week, but she knew the more unkept she got she more likely it would be that drivers would pass her by. She'd more closely resemble some homeless drug addict that even she would avoid if given the opportunity. She stood in the considerably cooler grass, and all at once allowed her tired legs to buckle buckle at the knees. Her small ass, squeezed even tighter and more pronounced in the faded and torn jeans she was wearing made a faint thump as she she hit the ground, but at this point she didn't mind that. She drew her legs up to sit Indian-style, and pulled her duffle bag around to the front of her to find her water bottle inside. She tilted her head back and and drank the luke-warm water, her thick and sensual lips pursed around the nozzle, allowing some of it to cascade down her jaws and chin to run down her neck, eventually pooling up on her chest and soaking into her top. 'Hmmmppphhh!' she pouted 'Water's even shittier today than usual...' She recapped the bottle, put it away, and fell back on the ground, resting her hands behind her head and staring up into the endless expanse of blue sky. She tugged her pony tail out from under her head, then let it drop, the long strands of her hair fanning out as it settled on the ground. She then stretched her long denim covered legs out and spread her toes (feeling her ankles pop in the process) and rested them on the ground too, crossing one leg over the other. 'I can't go back...' she thought, sucking on her bottom lip now wet with the water. She felt and urge of sadness swell within her at this thought, and it made her chest tighten up. She coughed lightly with the tightness, and mused over the fact that she'd gone at least three days without a cigarette. Her last cigarette came from a middle-aged lady; Brenda or Brianne, or some sort of name starting with a B. She'd bummed it off of her as the lady, and her husband Dave (or Danny, or whoever the hell it was driving the car) dropped her off on the outskirts of the small town she was going out of her way to walk around. She thought perhaps she was being paranoid, avoiding a whole town like that, but she couldn't be too sure if the news had traveled that far and whether or not it'd be safe just yet. The cigarette was a menthol of some sort, and though menthols weren't necessarily her smoke of choice, since it was to be her last one until God knows when, Lacey thought it was probably the best tasting smoke she'd ever enjoyed in her 18 years of existence. She had spent some time kicking herself off and on since the middle of yesterday for not making it last longer than she did (butt it out early, save some for later), but the feelings of self-disappointment were giving way to the feelings of fatigue, and not to mention the hunger that was gnawing away at her stomach. The sweat on her brow managed to trickle down and get into her eyes, stinging them a bit. She rubbed them, and somehow had a memory triggered of menthol cigarettes. Her eyes would burn like that from the smoke of several menthol cigarettes, smoked one right after the other. Luke had a tendency to chain-smoke his menthols when he got nervous, and he had done this around her, causing her eyes to burn, the night he broke it off with her. Of course, smoke mixed with tears would make her eyes burn and sting worse, but she'd fought those back for as long as she could manage that night. That night had a way of playing out in Lacey's mind like it had just took place, even though that event went down a while back. Luke was chain-smoking in her living room, like he'd been doing all evening, giving her a pretty obvious indication that something hard and heavy was on his mind. She layed back on the couch and snuggled up with a pillow, pretending to watch the television even though she couldn't help but watch Luke. He would pace to the window, then back to the arm of the couch, then back to the window too many times to count. Aside from racking her brain over what could possibly be bothering him (because he'd managed to keep it secret all evening), she wanted him to lay down on the couch with her like he'd done so many times before. She pushed her barefeet, which were warm from walking on the sidewalk that summer's night, into the refreshingly cool cushions of the couch, and tugged at the material of the pillow with her pearly white teeth. She shifted her hips to where her mini-skirt worked up and revealed the bottom of her sensual ass, but this didn't distract Luke from his pacing and smoking. He was this way at dinner that night as well, his brow all furrowed and wrinkled up as he stared into his glass, swirling the ice cubes around. Luke had taken Lacey to a restaurant he knew she liked (some locally owned Italian eatery as it turned out) but had left it up to her to call and make the reservations earlier that day. This was a most exquisite restaurant, and Lacey was never much of a gold-digger, but Luke always splurged on her and didn't mind taking her there once or twice a month. Dinner costed more money than she'd ever spend on one meal herself, and because of the atmosphere, proper attire was expected if you wanted to be left alone long enough to eat. Proper attire meant a jacket and tie for Luke, and in her particular case, shoes for the lady. She managed to keep a pair of classy looking (not to mention high-priced) flip-flops on long enough to be seated, but as soon as her beauteous feet were out of the host's and waiter's eye-sight, those thonged and leather inhibitors were slipped off onto the floor. She'd gave her legs a little wiggle, and felt her anklets and slip and settle completely even with her ankles. She wore more than a few anklets on each leg, as well as toe rings on each toe, aside from her big and pinky ones. She ran a big toe over the opposite foot to check if her rings were still there, then switched off and did the same thing to the other side. If those flip-flops had managed to work off a single toe-ring and cause it to get lost, Lacey knew that's put a damper on her entire evening. Thankfully, all of her sparkling and pretty foot jewelry was in place on her sexy feet. Unfortunately, Luke decided to pick that night to start acting weird. About half-way through the salads Lacey made a playful move for Luke's crotch. She knew the table-cloth was long enough to avoid embarassment (his embarassment, she was considerably more outspoken) so she outstretched a long, silky smooth leg and gripped at his package with her slender and articulate toes. Nine times out of ten this gave ol' Luke a raging hard-on that he'd have to save until they either got home, or on a few occasions to the back seat of the car parked somewhere private. She would always get a giddy feeling when this happened, watching Luke proceed to wolf down his food and only half-succeed in keeping his composure. She knew how to drive him wild, she always knew how to drive men wild. Lacey may not have had a lot of female friends, but she had men figured out. They were a walk in the park to read, considerably easier to understand than the women she'd encountered, who were prone to a lot more emotional behavior and mood swings. Inwardly she hoped she didn't come off that way, like other women she knew, to other people. But, as another indication of something being on his mind, Luke scooted back in his seat, and gave her a slight grimace. She took the hint, crossed her legs, and finished her salad. She figured she did a pretty good job at hiding the embarassment of the rejection for the rest of the dinner. Luke barely initiated any conversations with her, leaving most of the talking to her. When he did speak, it was all formal. Lacey got the feeling he was addressing her like a male buddy rather than his extremely young girlfriend. Lacey reflected on this as she lay on her couch, the tension of Luke's silence hanging heavy in the air. Once or twice she thought about standing and slipping out of the tiny and form-fitting dress, letting the small amount of material fall into a neat little pile encircling her sensual barefeet. Her slender body, with her flawless tan, shaved pussy, and tiny pert breasts would've cut the tension like a knife through hot butter, and she gladly letting the man have his way with her. Something was holding her back, however, and in retrospect Lacey already figured out what was coming that night. Luke took a deep draw of his cigarette, then slowly blew it out, watching the smoke spread out over the window as he was facing it. Lacey couldn't help but get a little bit turned on, in spite of the tension, as the street lights outside accentuated the broad shoulders of Luke's muscular frame. Even though he'd loosened his tie and unbuttoned his shirt as soon as they were in the car on their way home from the restaurant (summer heat was a bitch no matter what time of day), his shirt fanning out now making his triangular form harder to admire from the back, Lacey knew what sort of alpha-male type she considered herself lucky enough to have. It didn't matter that he was almost twice her age, he had the vitality, charisma, and charm of any young buck, perhaps better since he was more refined and mature than the men her age she'd been with. She felt her sex growing warmer and wetter, not to mention throbbing a bit, at the thought of Luke's hands and other body parts exploring her 94 lb petite body. Luke trucked back to the coffee table, blocking Lacey's view of the television, and grabbed up the ash-tray to butt this cigarette out and add it to the collection of his other cigarette butts that were filling the tray. He exhaled slowly through his nose as he closed his eyes, then turned to face her. "We can't see each other anymore..." he managed, his voice almost at a tremble. For some stupid reason, Lacey recalled the television's noise at that moment; the sound of laughter and Kramer from Seinfeld saying: "His father was a mudder and his mother was a mudder..." Now even though she could recall something from the television that she supposedly wasn't watching at that moment, the only thing she remembers Luke saying more than once after those initial words, during his mealy-mouthed spiel of half-baked excuses intended to soften the blow, was "my wife". Lacey wanted to cut loose on him, because normally when they'd have words of disagreement she was pretty quick with a comeback. This time was different. This time, all she could do was soak every painful second up, trying harder not to cry than to piece together some upstanding retort in self-defense. By the time he was finished Seinfeld was over and the late news was coming on. She was numb and indifferent, but she could remember something on the television about a burglary and fatal shooting being the teaser to make you want to watch the report. No telling how many minutes passed between the time he finished his speech and before he tried talking again. "So-" he began, almost afraid to speak after the damage he'd inflicted "-do you wanna talk about it?" Her eyes were welling with tears, but she rolled them over to look at him. She didn't know what to say by this point, what good would it do? She allowed her attention to go back to the television. There was some fat jackass on the screen wailing and hamming it up about a used car sale coming up that weekend. "Okay," he snorted "I guess not..." Lacey's eyes snapped and her mind shifted back into present day when she heard the distant sound of a car's engine. Before she was even aware of it herself, she had stood and was in a run to the roadside. She cocked her hips, and straightened out her top. Hey, if the driver was a man, she'd have to up her chances for getting a ride! She stuck her thumb out as the car came into view... |
| Posted by: Lou Gojira Jun 23 2004, 04:27 AM |
| Just a head's up about this story: Chapters 2 & 3 are finished, and things really get intense as the story progresses. My friend wrote chapter 2, and he's got Lacey doing some very cool things with her feet. I won't say anything further because I don't want to spoil it for anybody. In chapter 3, which I wrote, I'll just say a few words about that: glass, sole, heel, masturbation. If you want to see how all that plays out, sound off! I'll post chapters 2 & 3 only if you folks say you want to read them. I don't want to "force" this on anybody. |
| Posted by: DG2001 Jun 23 2004, 05:29 PM |
| Hi! I am quite interested in the rest of the story, please post it here or e-mail it to me (dg_2001@yahoo.com) Thanks! Regards DG |
| Posted by: Lou Gojira Jun 25 2004, 03:56 AM |
| Okay, here's chapter 2, written by my friend and great Bro extraordinaire Reinforcedheelsandtoes. I hope you like his direction of Lacey in this chapter. _______ The Spider and the Fly Part 1*Chapter 2 by: Reinforcedheelsandtoes ...And was rewarded with a family stuffed into a mini-van, along with what looked like every item that they owned. As the little van rushed by, Lacey was recipient of a disdainful glare from the woman in the passenger seat, and the opposite from the man driving. Lacey's blonde mane whipped past her face as the microbus receded into the distance. Deciding to start walking again, Lacey became entranced by the feel and sight of her pretty size 6s rising and falling on the hot asphalt. The white painted stripe was a bit cooler than the actual road, she discovered, and she made a token effort to step on the white paint. Her feet were in stark contrast to the road surface, not only in color and texture, but also in purpose. It was fascinating, she thought, to see her soft, helpless toes padding on the hard, black road. A cool breeze finally blew into her face and across her ears, drowning out all sounds and for the moment, all memories of Luke. Lacey closed her eyes and walked, allowing her toes to 'see' the road for her. She wasn’t worried, eight fucking cars all goddamn day! She almost wished one would hit her. Then she could get a ride in the ambulance, at least! Lacey smiled to herself and continued to daydream as she walked, but far away, in the common sense portion of her mind, a voice was whispering to her that she was about to die. Lacey realized a growl was coming from behind her and as she turned her head the horrible sound grew deafening and her last coherent thought was 'Iwaswalkinginthemiddleofthegoddamnyoustupidbitchyou'regonnadie!!!' Snapping her head around Lacey saw a set of huge ridiculous fangs and screaming, threw herself backwards onto the ground in the fetal position and waited for the excruciating pain of being torn apart. And waited. Slowly, opening her eyes, Lacey saw the grill and custom front bumper of a tractor trailer with one of those mouthful of fangs grill protectors on it hovering not four feet away, not moving in the middle of the road. Somehow, this monster had snuck up behind her and she didn’t even hear it! She could've been killed! The roar of its diesel engine assaulted every sense she had and adrenaline saturated her very soul. Then, making a sound associated with linehaul tractors the world over since the damn things were invented, the driver set its brakes, and literally jumped to the ground. He was tall, lean and tan, and if Lacey weren’t terrified beyond all rational thought, she would have been attracted. Surely no one would want to date a girl who at the moment needed a fresh pair of panties! The driver ran up to Lacey and as a result of still being curled up in a Laceyball, her barefeet landed right in the crook of his right bicep as he gently grabbed her shoulders. It was a reflex, but her toes curled around the trucker's arm, although neither one of them noticed. "ARE YOU OKAY?! ARE YOU HURT?!" he asked. The diesel was loud, but not that loud. This guy was shouting at the top of his lungs! 'Great', Lacey thought,’ a psycho!' "CAN YOU UNDERSTAND ME?!" he asked again. "What? Why in the hell are you shouting? Get off me!" Adrenaline was manifesting itself as anger and embarrassment, a slight improvement from near death, Lacey decided. The driver stood and beamed at her. " Oh shit, sorry" he started, still smiling down at her. He extended his manicured hand to help her off the ground. " I thought maybe you were deaf or retarded or something," he grinned as he picked up Lacey's duffel and handed it to her " Do you always walk down the middle of the road?" He did a little impromptu imitation of her sashaying down the highway, and they both broke into gales of hysterical laughter, probably more from adrenaline than anything else. "C'mon, I'll buy you dinner at the highway joint up the road a ways" "You don't mind giving me a ride?" Lacey asked. " I don't know," he teased. "You are kind of fat. I don't think I'll be able to go very fast!" "Fuck you!" Lacey shouted, smiling back at him. God, he was gorgeous! In that lean, rough Marlboro Man kind of way! "Seriously, though, can I ask you a question?" he said. " I guess so..." Lacey turned away and smiled. Sure you can bang my brains out, she thought. "What were you doing walking down the middle of the highway? Are you okay?" Lacey put her hand over her smiling face and replied, " It hurts my feet to walk on those stones at the side of the road" she looked over at the trucker, wondering what kind of reaction she would get. " They've got this new invention called shoes, perhaps you're familiar?" He teased again. Lacey climbed up into the idling tractor and caught her breath, the inside of this thing was beautiful! Carpeted and hardwood floors, real wood cabinets and a huge queen sized bed! God, it looked SO inviting! "Although," the driver started as he climbed behind the wheel, " If I had feet like yours, I wouldn’t wear any shoes either!" Yess! Lacey thought. A footman! "Don't look at my feet," she said softly, "they're so dirty!" "Once again leading us back to the subject of shoes! But I must say, if you're going to go barefoot, I'm going to stare at your feet! You don't like it, then again, you're going to have to explore the possibility of wearing a pair of shoes. My name is Geoff, with a 'G'. Pleased to meet 'ya!" "I'm Lacey. The pleasure is yours, I'm sure!" Lacey teased back, smiling at Geoff, and placed her feet up on the dash of the Kenworth tractor. "You're gonna cause us to have an accident!" Geoff cried with a smile.” I’m gonna be starin’ at those tootsies and not the road!” Geoff put the big tractor into gear. Lacey knew she was riding in a tractor-trailer, but it didn’t feel like one. Not the way she imagined it, anyway. This thing was fast! And the inside was as smooth and quiet as anything she had ever ridden in. Except for a persistent high pitched whine coming from beneath her feet! “ What’s that noise?” Lacey asked, turning to look at Geoff. She really couldn’t stand to look at him for long. It made her feel guilty. The memories of Luke were really hard to fight off and now she had to throw in a guilt trip on top of that, as well! “ What noise?” Geoff glanced her way for a second. Lacey pointed at her feet. “ Don’t you hear that?” she said. “ Oh! That’s the turbo.” Geoff took out a cigarette and offered it to Lacey. “This thing has a turbo?” Lacey didn’t really know what a turbo was, she had heard Luke talk cars with his college buddies, and was just repeating to make conversation. Lacey took the smoke. “Actually it has two” He handed over a lighter with a logo of the MGM Grand Casino on it. “You know cars?” “Not like I know nicotine.” Lacey took a long drag and relaxed into the air ride seat. Now this is how one is supposed to travel! She rubbed her feet together on the dash. They were really sore now. “ You need one of my special foot rubs” Geoff ventured, smiling at her again. The truck’s air assisted 18-speed transmission hissed as he shifted into 15th over. They were doing about 70 mph and it felt like riding on a cloud. “ Not if you don’t want me attacking you, I don’t” Lacey said, smiling, trying not to remember Luke’s face. “ What do you mean?” “I get kind of funny when some one rubs my feet. I get kind of excited” Lacey looked out the window at the truckstop Geoff had chosen. It actually looked very nice. Must be recently built, she mused. “Oh yeah?” Geoff grinned at her again. “Let me take a shower, and then I’ll flirt with you some more and you can shoot down my advances over dinner. How’s that sound?” “There’s a shower in here?” Lacey asked, suddenly excited. It had been too long since her last one. The shower and dinner were perfect. Lacey and Geoff were back in the posh comfort of the KW tractor watching satellite TV. After talking with each other over dinner, Lacey learned Geoff hadn’t always been a trucker. He was once with the Drug Enforcement Agency and had purchased the truck by one of those government seizure auctions, hence his manicured hands. Hands that were now gently rubbing the soles of her feet. It was all Lacey could do not to moan with pleasure. Geoff asked, “ So, Lacey, where are you headed?” Lacey, who was now breathing gently through her parted lips smiled and replied, “ I’m sorry,” she laughed, “ You were saying?” They both laughed at Lacey’s humor as Geoff slowly raising Lacey’s feet towards his face replaced the conversation between them. She could feel his hot breath on her soles, between her toes. He lifted her out her jeans as she struggled with his belt buckle. He undressed her while never failing to keep at least one of her toes in his mouth. His big hands and mouth never left her body as Lacey took his masculinity between her moist lips and first kissing then licking the shaft. Lacey could almost take his whole length, something Luke taught her to do. Dammit! Lacey was beginning to believe she couldn’t do a single goddamn thing without Luke’s face popping up in her mind! She struggled with her tears as Geoff entered her, burying her face in his chest and allowing him to do as he wished. She knew she still loved Luke and that she could run as far as she wished, but she would never outrun her feelings. Later as Geoff lay sleeping, Lacey gently opened the door of the giant Kenworth tractor and threw her bag to the ground. Lacey walked to the exit ramp of the highway in the early morning hours and started to make her way along the shoulder. As traffic passed her, she would greet each vehicle with an outstretched thumb and a mane of freshly washed hair. It wouldn’t be long now, she thought, before she could hitch a ride… |
| Posted by: DG2001 Jun 25 2004, 04:09 AM |
| Thanks Lou! Please post part three too...I am quite interested in the glass :-) Regards DG |
| Posted by: Lou Gojira Jun 25 2004, 04:19 AM |
| I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far DG. Chapter 3 should go up this weekend. I personally think chapter 3 is a little rough around some edges on a literary sense, but I think you'll enjoy the subject-matter nonetheless. I think you'll like reading about the glass as much as I liked writing about it. After chapter 3, I'm wanting to start something on this forum with the story. More details on that after chapter 3. Stay tuned... |
| Posted by: Lou Gojira Jun 26 2004, 04:04 AM |
| Here's chapter 3. Hope you like it... _______ The Spider and the Fly Part 1*Chapter 3 by: Lou Gojira A nice and relieving stream of cool winds blew across the landscape that pleasant Thursday afternoon and seemed to lick every inch of Lacey's young body as she stopped walking and stood at the roadside, allowing herself to relax as much as a person could standing in one spot. She lost track of how many miles she'd covered that gray and cloudy day, and for the moment that was okay, because today was a serious relief from how it had been for a while now. Her little white tank top fluttered slightly with the breeze, and the untucked bottom of it rode up to teasingly reveal her taut and tanned belly. Her "store-bought" blonde mane whipped about a bit as well, particularly her pony-tail that seemed to act like a riding crop, lightly smacking the back of her neck as if subtly saying: "get a move on sister!" She observed the trees as they swayed and moved, branches twisting and turning with the winds, and could tell by their leaves that rain was coming as certainly as death and taxes were a part of living. Lacey had succeeded in making herself forget most of her (often unpleasant) past, but there were some high points and some little nuggets of wisdom that stayed with her. One such nugget she received over ten years ago from her mother... She had been outside playing by herself, trying to get lost in the woods that were behind her home, deeply entrenched in some imaginary game, something that children without neighbors and expensive toys tend to do, and her mother told her to keep an eye on the leaves earlier that day. "When you see 'em turned over, that means they're thirsty and rain is comin'."But by the time she remembered those words, and noticed the overturned leaves the sky decided to break open. When she came trudging up the steps of the back porch almost 20 minutes later, she looked like a drowned and miserable little rat. She'll never forget how her mother laughed that day, cackling like some fat hen that just layed an egg, as she toweled her angry and embarassed daughter dry. Ever since that incident, whenever she saw the light underbelly of the leaves on the trees, she knew rain was right around the corner. Years later when she relayed the story to Luke, he gave it about half a chuckle and made yet another comment (among many over time) about her being a hick. She never minded the hick comments that he'd throw out there; what did that sissified city boy know? "You can take the girl out of the country, but you can't take the country out of the girl." he'd lovingly say with a grin, sometimes tacking it onto one of his numerous hick comments. It sounded like a legitimate and tried and true enough saying, but where his city-slicking ass picked it up she didn't have a clue. Thinking back, that was probably another thing about her he enjoyed, getting a sampling taste of the American South without having to relocate. Up until he met her, his only semi-real exposure to the South was "bullshit" country music (poor uneducated Luke actually put the words "Dixie Chicks" and "Hank Williams" in the same sentence once, blasphemy!), the lame-assed line-dancing that he and his old buddies from college would stand to the side and snicker over if they happened to be in a bar or club that had people doing it, and (sadly) re-runs of the Dukes of Hazard. "Is that why you go barefoot everywhere?" he'd ask jokingly, knowing good and well that wasn't the reason. The reason was, as Luke found out eventually, was that Lacey was not only an exhibitionist (she was a far cry from a snob, but she knew very well that her feet were gorgeous), she had a rather large streak of masochism in her too. She quite enjoyed, in some (perhaps perverse) way, the mild abuse her barefeet would get from walking on rough terrain or banging them into things, and she seemed to wear dirty soles like a badge of pride. It made her feel vunerable to the world, helpless you could say, and this gave her quite a charge. Now Luke was the type of man who knew the differences in female feet; what constituted ugly feet from pretty ones, but it wasn't until he hooked up with Lacey that he got to fully explore this "subterainean world"of sexuality and eroticism. Just when ol' Luke thought he'd been around the block plenty of times in his 34 years of life, and seen and done anything worth seeing and doing in the bedroom, 18 year old Lacey came long and blew him away. Lacey had managed to awaken the sexual beast that lay dormant in him for a little too long, and she reflected on this as she slowly picked up stride again. 'Oh Luke...' she thought as she walked, staring down at her beautifully barefeet, treading the roadside gravel, almost cat-like in the way she lightly stepped. 'Why couldn't I keep you?' She jerked one foot up suddenly with a wince. Holding her leg by the ankle, she bent sideways and saw a crystal-like tiny shard of broken glass (no bigger than a pebble, or a particularly large grain of sand) poked into the soft and fleshy ball of her barefoot. The spark of pain sent a tingling rush up her leg that was enjoyable in a way that she understood on her own levels, and yet it was annoying. Maybe the pain did it, but at that very next moment the words "my wife" coming from Luke's mouth went through her mental ears. She squeezed her eyes shut, feeling them start to well with tears, her beautiful mouth grimacing and exposing her white teeth. She wasn't sure if it was the glass or the painful words from Luke that made her want to cry, as she spread her long and defined dirty toes holding her ankle, arching her foot to where the glass piece was more pronounced. Instead of plucking it out, Lacey stared straight ahead at the road disappearing over the horizon, released her ankle, and stepped back down. She felt one particular rock pressed even with the piece of glass, and without so much as taking a deep breath, she started twisting her ankle, pushing her leg down, driving the piece further in. What started as a little spark in her foot was now a throbbing burn, and she began to walk again, not cat-like, but forceful. She wanted the pain, she needed it maybe, to push Luke a little bit more out of her mind. And in her stride, she noticed her pussy would get warmer and wetter each time that certain foot struck the gravel, sending that delicious burn in spurts up her leg, into her sex. It made her heart pound, as well as make her breath a little weaker. She was beginning to get lost, consumed in this pseudo-masturbatory euphoric state. Her cluttered and racing mind found a means of reaching a peaceful self-gratifying utopian nirvana. That is until she felt the first warm droplets of rain start to pepper her bare and sun-bronzed shoulders. 'Time to get drenched...' she thought to herself becoming aware of reality again, as the surroundings made it clear that shelter from the rain was going to be mediocre at best. All at once this impending and overdue summer downpour hit, and Lacey took off running. She had to find something to get under, and quick. It didn't take long for steam to rise from the asphault, and the air had become both cool with the rain, and miserably humid from the steam all at once. She realized a little later down the road as she ran that she was practically soaking her panties through, that burning rush still as strong minutes later as it was when she first got it. She figured her excitement would've shown through her pants if the rain hadn't already drenched them... The old saying "pouring like piss out of a boot" fit the weather to a tee that rainy and generally overall miserable Thursday afternoon in the big city. Ian slowly blew a stream of smoke from his nostrils as he sat and watched the cascading drops add to the all-consuming sheet of water that enveloped the windshield of the car. He rolled the automatic window down just enough to flick the still-lit butt outside, and then watched it bounce off the brick wall of where he was parked as the glass went sliding back up. He mindlessly groped at the steering wheel and tried to get a grip on his nerves, which were slowly but surely becoming more and more frazzled. Being cooped up in his car in the back alley of a run down section of town for so long the windows were just beginning to steam up and fog over was bad enough. Trying to get this extremely paranoid dipshit sitting next to him to tell him what he needed to know without scaring him off was the cherry on top of the sundae. 'Think of the money...' he kept mentally reminding himself whenever the urge to cut the pussy-footing and start prying would begin to strike. If Paranoid Motherfucker (which he mentally amused himself by nicknaming this guy, which he also kep to himself) wasn't so anal about covering his tracks, he could've been lucky enough to talk this deal over in a nice cozy cafe where he would get a cup of "real motherfucking coffee" and not this "gas station cat-piss" that he had to settle for (which, incidentally, was getting colder and less satisfying than it already was the longer this situation played out). While Ian was amusing himself with "could've-might've-would've been's", he almost allowed himself to openly grin at the idea of getting to talk this over at a nudie bar, which, like strong and heavily caffeinated "real" coffee, he was particularly fond of as well. "Who am I kidding?' he thought 'Nobody talks around tits, that only happens in movies.' But he already knew, that if this deal was to go down with him carrying out the deed, he'd find himself in more than a few nudie bars before it was all said and done. Even better, Paranoid Motherfucker was going to have to pay all of the admission charges, no questions asked, and perhaps a few lap dances would hit the bill too if he saw it fit. "Tell me about where she worked." Ian said quite professionally (by his standards) and not turning to face this passenger that was taking up his time. "I told you about it." Luke answered him as he fished his own cigarettes out of his shirt pocket. He'd been meaning to cut back for a while now, but damned if the situation didn't make him antsy enough to fall prey to the nicotine demon once again. "No-" Ian retorted with a slight pause for dramatic effect "-you didn't. You told me the name of the place and the days she worked." He turned and faced Luke, pushing his glasses up his nose simply for something to do with his idle hands. "How close did she get to her co-workers? You think she might've got close enough to one of them that they wouldn't mind shacking her up somewhere? I know the kinda' money those girls can make, it wouldn't be nothing to have a secluded little cabin out in the middle of the woods or enough cash to pay for a hotel room way the fuck out of town for an indefinite period of time." He felt his aggrevation tick one notch closer to all-out anger when he saw that Luke was going to take his time to answer. And Luke took his time to answer, sure enough, making it all the more clear when he fired up the menthol he had pursed in his lips. Sure, he didn't like the way this guy carried himself, (so it was quite the little treat to push this skinny, snotty little prick's buttons whenever he could) but he was truely at a loss for knowing because Lacey was the type of person to leave work 'at' work. Aside from the time she came to him wanting to press the charges she did, she never went into a whole lot of detail about the Double-Visions club. In retrospect, he realized she did it to avoid stepping on any feelings of jealousy he may have stupidly acquired, not allowing his mind's eye to picture the total strangers drooling over this lady he cared so much for. He felt his chest warm up a little, reflecting on how thoughtful she always was towards him, whether it was a conscious effort on her part or something she did instinctively. Not to mention that Lacey always contended that it was just a stepping stone of a place, nothing to even remotely think about retiring from. She had her dreams, and he used to enjoy sitting and listening to them when she talked about them, even though he knew he never really showed it when she did. That was something else that became more clear in retrospect. But wait a minute. Is "care" the word to fit the feelings he had? He sure "cared" enough to find himself secretly talking with a private investigator in a back alley, standing a very good chance of losing everything he had if the wrong people were to find out. He sure "cared" enough to spiral into a depressed state of confusion when the police wire came in at the office, and Lacey vanished even before that. He "cared" so much that he never felt right with himself after the night of the break-up, and inevitably blamed himself for everything that happened even though reality and common sense would've proved him wrong if he had allowed himself to stay in reality long enough to see it. Luke was a social drinker, by nature, but within the last month he found himself stopping off to pick up a flat bottle on his way home from work several nights a week. Yeah, he "cared" alright. He "cared" so much it was all slowly and surely killing him. Not that his wife noticed though, she wouldn't notice unless he suddenly lost his job over it and it cut into their income substantially. "I guess she had a couple of girls or whoever she talked to," Luke finally answered as his cigarette burned up between his fingers. "Aside from Krystal I don't think she got too froggy with anybody." "And this Krystal..." Ian started, sipping his coffee and then grimacing shortly there-after. "She still works there, right?" "No." Luke said flatly. "I'm pretty sure she skipped town before Lacey disappeared." He turned to look out the passenger window at the wall of graffitti facing him, and mindlessly read the words 'FUCK GRINGO' (all immacualtely rendered in spray paints) for the thousandth time as they sat there in the car. "Every subpoena we tried to serve her got returned. After the fifth one the sheriff told me to give it up." Ian snickered a little, and when Luke looked at him, he began to explain: "It's nothing." He stared out the windshield for a minute."It's just that I got a brother in some town up North who's a sheriff. Real Andy Griffith set-up he's got going too..." His smile was slowly disappearing. "Don't worry, we're not close at all. And should I take this job, he'd be the last person sticking his nose in this." He wasn't about to explain the gregarious claims his brother made about vampires living in the town, or that he was actually seeing one on a regular basis. "Well, whether or not you think she's guilty-" Luke started. "Sir!" Ian cut him off, almost slipping up and calling him by name. If Luke knew some things about him, or that he knew what he did, he concluded, he could kiss the possibility of this lofty paying job and perhaps even his life good bye. "I could care less if she did it or not." he popped his thumbs with his index fingers "She could've cut their big black dicks off and stuck them in the freezer for popsicles, a la Jeffrey Dahmer, for all I care..." he folded his arms "If you want me to find her, I'll find her. Morals or ethics don't mean shit to me." "Your humanity is your strength..." Luke said, rolling his eyes while not turning to face Ian. 'And your loyalty to your wife is your's.' Ian thought. Lacey could hear the thunder gently rumbling in the distance from where she was poised. She had ran long-enough to find an overpass, which was above a stream. The stream was probably pretty high in less dry times of the year, you could probably fish out of it, she figured, but as it stood at the moment all it was was a medium sized flow of water, with plenty of embankment on each side for her to find a dry spot. The muscles in her long legs twitched as she slowed her breathing down from her frantic dash. She stood there under the small bridge and let her duffle bag drop to the soft bare ground, mentally cussing the fact that a nice warm towel was nowhere to be had in the contents within. She noticed her nipples were rock hard and pointed erectly through the thin, and now soaked white tank top that clung to her skinny top half. She plucked at the cotton material annoyingly, hating the sticky feeling it had. After a few breezes found their way through the small tunnel, Lacey folded her arms, her teeth chattering from the cold her wet clothes generated. She cast a quick glance out both sides of the tunnel, mainly out of habit, because who in their right mind would be around a place like that and on a day like this? She gripped the bottom of her top, arched her back, and pulled it off over the top of her long and dripping hair, her ribbed definition showing through as she did this, her nipples pointing even further away from each other. She let the top flop onto the duffle, and started to unbutton her equally soaked jeans. 'I haven't come this far to freeze to fuckin' death...' she thought, as she pulled her beauteous tanned legs out of the denim and using one of her pretty feet to fling the pants on top of her white tank top. The cum drenched thong came off with a snapping sound, and that hit the pile too. She ran her hands rather vigorously over her smooth skin, up and down her chest, around her sides, just anything to get some of that cold rain off. She slipped her hands around to her teardrop-like ass, rubbing both cheeks simultaneously in circular motions, then down the backs of her thighs and around to her knees. She gave her head a shake, and felt the weight of the rain water in her hair suddenly become a bit less, and heard it spatter the concrete walls of the embankment, then finished hand-drying her hair by running her fingers through it a few times. Her pony-tail holder got slipped off when she did this, and to keep from losing it, she slipped it onto her ankle (as she had a habit of doing) to join the anklets that were already there. As the twitching in her legs came to an end, she noticed the burn in her foot was easing up too. She raised her leg and looked at her gorgeously dirty and wrinkled sole, the glass was still there even though the burn was less obvious. Maybe she ran so hard for so long she actually managed to kill the little nerve that registered that pleasurable pain? She shifted her foot around on the ground a bit, with no luck. That delicious feeling was gone. But what a feeling that was, she marveled, her cunt still warm, wet, and throbbing from it. As she thought more about it, she started trembling; not from any sort of chill (which was almost a thing of the past as well) but from the excitement of the burning sensation. Her breathing picked up pace again. 'I have to finish this' she thought 'I'm too turned on...' And so she did, putting all of her weight on that one slightly injured foot, arching it, then crouching to where her shaved and lovely pussy was even with her upturned heel. She rested her cunt on her smooth heel and undulated her hips, massaging her pussy with her foot. The weight of her body pressing even harder on the glass brought the tingling feeling back, and coupled with the soothing massage her pussy was receiving, she layed her head back on her shoulders and softly moaned, the cold of her long wet hair touching the lower part of her back. With one hand she tugged and pinched at her tight and rock solid nipples, and with the other hand she teased and stroked her clit with her finger tips. She didn't care if somebody may have walked up on her just then, she didn't care if there could've been a flash-flood, causing the creek to overflow and take her with it. The only things that were in her world for the next several and ecstatic moments were Lacey and her beautiful body. Every nerve-ending in her body tingled with an electric-like charge, while her heart hammered her chest like a jackhammer. She just kept on doing this; grinding, undulating, teasing, stroking, pinching, moaning. It could've been for an hour or it could've been all day, she didn't know and didn't care because she wasn't timing herself, all she was working for was that hot and wet climax. When it came, she thought she heard herself shriek, but wasn't sure, as she was so caught up in it. Lacey layed there now, naked, beautiful, out of breath and basking in her own aftersex glow. She could feel the dirt of the ground pressing into her bare back as she layed there, her legs crossed one over the other, her arched and delicate barefeet there in her field of view. She couldn't help but want for a cigarette to make this relaxing and fulfilled moment complete, but she figured she'd have to make herself do without. There was no telling how long she'd have to stay down there, waiting for her clothes to dry, or more importantly when the downpour was going to ease up enough to hit the road. All she knew was that it was going to be a while, thankfully, because after cumming that hard, she was too weak to move... |
| Posted by: Lou Gojira Jul 1 2004, 05:10 AM |
| Anybody feel like taking a shot at writing chapter 4? All I ask is that if you do, please keep in mind the following: *Lacey can't get killed or disfigured. *Please keep the characters in cannon with what has been established so far. *Have Lacey return to hitch-hiking by the end of the chapter in case somebody else wants to write a new chapter. *This goes without saying, but never have Lacey wear shoes. That's all. So who wants to step up and take a swing at chapter 4? |
| Posted by: DG Apr 12 2006, 05:56 PM |
| Hi Lou Any plans to go on with this wonderful story ? Regards DG |
| Posted by: Lou Gojira Apr 13 2006, 03:43 AM |
| Thanks for the kind words DG! Yeah, there's all kinds of stuff planned for Lacey, but I've decided to get all of this re-written and tightened up first before I show anymore to the public. Hang in there my friend...Lacey is just starting her barefoot adventures! She's not going to disappear. |
| Posted by: judo3636 May 8 2006, 06:18 AM |
| i would love to read more. great job. it would be nice if you mention the hot ground again in the future stories. (like when the ground is so hot you are desperate to find shade but cant.) thanks you are awesome |
| Posted by: Lou Gojira May 9 2006, 02:54 AM |
| Thanks for the nice words judo, and I will take note of that...stating the ground's heat...good idea! Like I say, I've got quite a few chapters hammered out on Lacey, but I've put her on hiatus for a little while (don't worry, she WILL come back soon enough!) to work on another barefoot girl named Stephanie. Stephanie's story is a collaboration effort, so I can't start posting anything on her until all the revisions are done and I can get approval from my co-writer/partner. If you are familiar with Mara of the Celts, then my writing partner needs no introduction. Stephanie's tale is, to my knowledge, a bit of a departure from most barefoot girl fiction. The story takes place waaaay back in 1984, and she is a high school student coming to grips with not only her love of going barefoot, but finding out that she's an unwilling participant in a plot that literally spans the world! There is a thick science fiction overtone to her story, but as you can guess the main focus is on Stephanie and her gloriously naked feet. I'll post this story here when it's ready to be seen one day. I hope everybody will like it. |
| Posted by: judo3636 May 11 2006, 12:07 AM |
| sounds like it will be a great story. i am familiar with dennis cramer or crabapple. he is awesome. you guys will do a fantastic job. i am really looking forward to it. if there is a possibility of a sneak preview my email is judo3636@yahoo.com . i await the story with extreme anticipation. greg |
| Posted by: Lou Gojira May 12 2006, 03:32 AM | ||
You're right Greg...Dennis is an awesome writer! I've admired his work for years and years, so as you can guess this has been a great opportunity and a fun time to get to work on a project with him. Thanks for your enthusiasm and your interest in Stephanie's story. I've added your e-mail to my contacts list, so let me get it okayed with Dennis, and if he says yes, I'll send you a sample! -Lou- |
| Posted by: judo3636 May 17 2006, 06:52 PM |
| that would be great. what is the status on the project? greg |
| Posted by: Lou Gojira May 18 2006, 12:03 AM |
| I just asked him again, so I'm waiting for him to get back with me. As soon as I get a thumbs-up, I'll be sending you a sample. As for the status of the project, book 1 is finished, and we're 17 chapters into book 2. This stuff is epic man, epic! |
| Posted by: Lou Gojira May 19 2006, 01:06 AM | ||
Check your e-mail. |
| Posted by: DG2001 May 7 2021, 11:55 PM |
| Hi all Bumping back this amazing story: "Lacey: The spider and the fly" |